Memories

[Abigail09]

Memories like flip of pages
Memories like thorns and roses
Memories reflect our past
Memories like works of art hanging on the walls of a Gallery ,
We reminisce just by looking at them.
Thinking of the times when we wish we had done things differently
We make memories everyday.
We can make new and happy ones starting from now.
Memories are our own stories.
Lets make them worth looking at .

[Clifora]

This seems like a great work of poetry. It sounds so...deep. Great job on the poem! (Wait did you write it?)

[Abigail09]

Yes I did .Thank you .

[Zion Mesa]

Simple but sweet

[Abigail09]

Thank you

[adamgreenrock]

Short and simple, but effective. I really love your work here. Thanks for sharing your poetry!

[Abigail09]

[kumkum27]

That's deep and amazing.
Would just suggest a thing there should be the word " are " in the first two lines after memories.
Other than that it is soothing to the soul

[Me_Read]

Nice poem, I like how it calls to action change in the memories that people make on a daily basis,

[Fernando Purba]

a very good poem. Instantly can bring us to remember the past

[Abigail09]

[gayscott]

Memories are very important. I enjoyed your poem. Great job!

[bellajavier]

This poem is so beautiful! You did a great job with this one. Its so soothing and calm poem.

[Abigail09]

[Kayzed]

I love the way you're broad in your imagery of memories. The way you bring out an abstract entity through concrete relateable representations.