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Memories
Posted: 08 May 2016, 07:30
by Abigail09
Memories like flip of pages
Memories like thorns and roses
Memories reflect our past
Memories like works of art hanging on the walls of a Gallery ,
We reminisce just by looking at them.
Thinking of the times when we wish we had done things differently
We make memories everyday.
We can make new and happy ones starting from now.
Memories are our own stories.
Lets make them worth looking at .
Re: Memories
Posted: 24 Jul 2016, 04:54
by Clifora
This seems like a great work of poetry. It sounds so...deep. Great job on the poem! (Wait did you write it?)
Re: Memories
Posted: 24 Jul 2016, 08:29
by Abigail09
Yes I did .Thank you .
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 09:58
by Zion Mesa
Simple but sweet
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 10:20
by Abigail09
Thank you
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 11:34
by adamgreenrock
Short and simple, but effective. I really love your work here. Thanks for sharing your poetry!
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 14:03
by Abigail09
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 14:41
by kumkum27
That's deep and amazing.
Would just suggest a thing there should be the word " are " in the first two lines after memories.
Other than that it is soothing to the soul
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Jan 2020, 23:42
by Me_Read
Nice poem, I like how it calls to action change in the memories that people make on a daily basis,
Re: Memories
Posted: 29 Jan 2020, 08:36
by Fernando Purba
a very good poem. Instantly can bring us to remember the past
Re: Memories
Posted: 29 Jan 2020, 13:05
by Abigail09
Re: Memories
Posted: 19 Feb 2020, 18:56
by gayscott
Memories are very important. I enjoyed your poem. Great job!
Re: Memories
Posted: 28 Feb 2020, 15:00
by bellajavier
This poem is so beautiful! You did a great job with this one. Its so soothing and calm poem.
Re: Memories
Posted: 29 Feb 2020, 03:41
by Abigail09
Re: Memories
Posted: 20 Apr 2020, 18:21
by Kayzed
I love the way you're broad in your imagery of memories. The way you bring out an abstract entity through concrete relateable representations.