Seasons, a poem

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Enis Nikci
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Seasons, a poem

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I watched spring, fall and winter break
and your smile slowly fade
now all I can do is vouch
for you
and hope one day we reunite
in heaven’s gate.
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Your poignant poetry captivates the essence of passing time and its impact on emotions. With vivid imagery, you beautifully capture the cycle of seasons, paralleling it with the fading of a cherished smile. The simplicity in your words brings forth profound emotions, leaving readers contemplating the inevitable changes that life brings. The poem's yearning and hope for a reunion add a touch of bittersweetness, painting a picture of love that transcends earthly boundaries. Your ability to evoke both introspection and empathy within just a few lines is truly commendable. 'I Watched Spring, fall, and Winter Break' is a heartfelt reflection on the passage of time and the enduring power of love.
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