Hidden Affection

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Kristhy Pelayo
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Hidden Affection

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We took kilometers and steal long hours walking around those artefact of nature covered in green and yellow hues
We knew how those birds are singing
Along with the wind that's softly sailing, touching the deepest part of our naked soul

Every step you take closer to me,
It gave me the chance to hear beats coming back and forth inside my whole being
They're rushing, so fast that it made me stop from breathing

Lovely man,
From the moment you told me about your favorite song,
It became my favorite song, too.
From the moment you said how much you desire to be the man you want to become in the future,
I then started asking God to hear your prayers.
And when you said you are the most doltish person,
Inside me want to let you feel how stunning and special you are to me.

I hope someday, time will help you know these things I kept within
And if that time will not happen, then I will just keep it until these feelings ends

But I hope before it end
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