Poem writing

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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sholayelily
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Poem writing

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This poem was written by me and I would love for you guys to share your thoughts about it.❤️❤️❤️🤩🤩

Title: "Embracing Resilience: Navigating Life's Challenges with Strength and Confidence"

Oh, oh, oh, oh
What merits do I bring to myself?
Those flaws and shackles
That chain and pin me down
I tried to redeem myself
But all seems lost

What aspirations do I dream of?
Those bold words I tell myself
Why do dreams seem so real
When they are all shattered and unreal?
Being able to speak is not deserving

Those stumbled moments and shame
That dwell deep within me
Fearing if I stand tall
I would be pushed aside as dust.
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