Creative original works : poetry

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Nqubeko Minenhle
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Creative original works : poetry

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Lonely feelings

I feel like there's strong flames burning
inside my chest

My heart couldn't pump normal in my less
pulse triggers, lonely feelings

The way I see the day lite at it's own self, it creates no interest, lonely feelings

There's no longer any interest of walking in
the night, lonely feelings

My sights feels the sourness of the days lonely feelings

The feeling of autumn leaves falling and dusty wind fails my apatite of enjoying the fruity fullness of enjoying life

Lonely feelings.
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