Love lost

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Jason Rosenquist
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Love lost

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I don't know exactly where my soul is, but you do. It feels good when you touch it.



I don't know right where one keeps their potential, but you do. I like it when you see mine.



I didn't know dreams were contagious, but they are. I'm infected with all of yours.



I didn't know hidden thoughts and desires made noise, but you heard all of mine.



I didn't know that I didn't know a lot, until you taught me.



And I didn't know I was happy. Until you left...
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Valentine Nyanchama
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Love gone bitter. Learn to let in and let go.. It will free you and be in a position to experience love again. A great piece.
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