Domestic violence

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Neelmani Bhatia
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Loosing my baby
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Neelmani Bhatia

A dot on the kit
I knew you were on your way
Told your father as he watched the Telly
Drunk, he hit me on my belly
A spot
I knew you were gone
Even before you were born
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Yvonne Marie
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This is very soul stirring. I just want to cry when I read this. Abuse is a horrible epidemic!I feel for this mother, and am so angry at the father. Thank you for sharing ❤
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