Smell the flowers.

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ncoard
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Smell the flowers.

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you kiss the moon and the taste of galaxies sits on your tongue like an old friend,
the world is at your fingertips but you can’t help but look further,
for something more,
for something better than a rock filled with beating hearts
that never seem to beat in sync. or want to, anyway.


you swallow the stars & you implode,
you swallow the sky & you wonder
why you ever thought that mundane things were
any less than everything you never knew.

mystery isn’t always beautiful.
sometimes it’s dark & it swallows you whole,
sometimes it takes a rope around your wrists,
an anchor tied at the end to keep it from
devouring everything that you are.


don’t get lose in what you don’t know.
get lost in what you do,
find beauty in what you can touch
& dream of what you can’t.
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Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
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Keep up the good work, and read lots of poetry to keep improving. :)
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Absolutely beautiful! It's so rare for people to be passionate about poetry today, don't let anyone get you down. Poetry is incredible.
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This is really beautiful! Love your choice of words and just overall the way you worded the whole thing.
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Post by rosalyncaar »

feveredpoet wrote:Keep up the good work, and read lots of poetry to keep improving. :)
Read to write. Then read some more.

Thanks for sharing your words with me!
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