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finding you is
chasing shadows
straight into the sidewalk

your chalky features
blur in black
and blue secret cracks

I thought a gasp
slipped from your silhouette
to beg my dreams to stay

till dawn, I heard only
windy wishes,
also out of reach

Good poem Hannah!!

I like what the poem has to say and how it says it. I especially like the alliteration which seemed appropriately phrased to the context and not forced. Well done!

Thank you!