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Did you get over me?
I've got a lot to say
Why did you have to mess up my head
I've been thinking about you for so long

If I was away from you
Do you think I wouldn't miss you?
Feels like this messed up feeling is too much
I don't want to be awake
When you're in my sleeping heaven
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The last two lines of this poem describe a feeling that is both familiar and distant. Like dream magic or love. Thanks for sharing.
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