A poem that I wrote about my faith

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A poem that I wrote about my faith

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Pure Joy

When I think of You
I feel pure joy
Because You love me
Unconditionally
You created me
Knowing in advance
Who you wanted me
To be
You have a plan
For my life
You have always
Been there for me
Even when I
Did not know it
Or thought you
Were not
Or simply just
Somehow forgot
I pray to You
Regularly
And constantly ask
For Your guidance
In my life
I love and need You
So very much
Since life
Has been difficult
And I never know
What curveballs
It will throw at me
Without You
I would be lost
With You
I am found
Thank You Lord
For being You
And for accepting me
As I am
With all my faults
And for giving me
Gifts that I can use
For Your glory and honor
And for the
Pure joy
Of others and myself
I do not know
What the future
Has in store for me
But I know that
You do
And You will
Help me through
And that someday
I will be
The person You
Created me
To be.
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That was great! Good job in putting your faith into words. :D
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Thank you very much! I like it a lot too and it is a pleasure to share it.
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Post by DATo »

Very nice Melinda! And thank you for sharing!
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Thank you and you are welcome.
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Post by Wasif Ahmed »

A really great poem Melinda. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us. :)
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Thank you very much and it was a joy to do so.
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That was nice. A lot of separate lines, but nice.
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Thank you.
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Post by LShonRob »

This poem is awesome! Thank you for openly sharing your faith! You have expressed wonderfully what believers feel about the Lord. I'm so thankful for his love for me! I like how you Incorporated how hard life can be, how we don't always hit the mark, and God loves us no matter what. Good poem!
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Thank you so much! You are welcome and thank you for reading. I am glad that you enjoyed it and could relate to it. Thank you for your compliments. I am also very grateful, appreciative, and thankful for His love for me and for us all. I truly believe that God does love us no matter what because of His grace and forgiveness. We are truly blessed.
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Fantastic! Thanks for sharing. I love reading other people's poetry.
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You are welcome and thank you for reading and for the compliment.
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Post by rssllue »

Very nice! Thanks for sharing your heart. For His glory!
~ occupare fati suffocavit

I will both lay me down in peace, and sleep: for Thou, LORD, only makest me dwell in safety. ~ Psalms 4:8
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You are welcome and thank you and God is good.
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