Little ride of love
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Clarissa
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Little ride of love
i'm on a little maybe ride of love
tiny and scared of the rush
i think i fell in love with a hurricane
it picks me up and dances with me in the rain
the little maybe ride of reckless grace
the little maybe ride of a loveless chase
tiny and scared of the rush
i think i fell in love with a hurricane
it picks me up and dances with me in the rain
the little maybe ride of reckless grace
the little maybe ride of a loveless chase
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Sarah_Khan
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Ooo I like this poem! Good job. 
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DATo
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Very nice! Sounds like song lyrics. [:- )
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Aohanlon86
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Fantastic. I love the last two lines the most
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Ljessup
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The line, "i think i fell in love with a hurricane it picks me up and dances with me in the rain" is phenomenal. I love the image it painted as I was reading this poem. I read it over and over and the more I read it the more I could see what you were bringing to life on the page. I would emphasize at the beginning of the poem where you connect "little" and "maybe," but that might be because of how I read it and interpreted it. All in all it paints a picture that everyone can relate to in life through various relationships and it's wonderful!
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