Your Betrayal

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Elissa Sio
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Your Betrayal

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It doesn’t make sense
Nothing makes sense
What are you doing?
Aren’t we best friends?

Why are you standing by their side?
Why are you standing against me?
Why is your sword pointed at my heart?
Why aren’t you what you used to be?

When I realise what you’ve done
I don’t quite believe it
It feels like a nightmare
But us now is legit

I don’t want to fight you
But you leave me no choice
You’re ready to kill me
And after that you’ll rejoice

But I had always looked at you like a friend
To be exact, a best friend
Never would I have seen you as an enemy
But now I have to defend

What has become of you my dearest friend?
Those memories that would never fade
Those years that we laughed
Those games that we played

I really don’t want to fight you
Despite this twist in your mind
Even though evil has infected you
I never knew you were this blind

We were the top of every field
We always sparred against each other
And through all our fighting
You were like by brother

Dear brother, so this is our final match
Whoever wins will live
Who ever loses will die
This time we can’t both survive

I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you from evil
I’m sorry I have to kill you
I’ll make my sword quick
I hope you’ll forgive me too

Can you see the tears pouring out?
As I plunge my sword into your heart?
My soul is screaming in agony
We will forever be apart.

E.S 14 yo
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