Love?

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What is this love thing?
Or at least what is it about?
Is it all kisses and romance?
Or physical touch more than once?
Is it about intimacy when given the chance?
Meeting daily more than once?
Is it thinking of someone when in a trance?
And making each other advance?
Can someone explain it's happentance?
Is it about smiles and emotion-enhance?
Or is it just another circumstance?
What is this thing?

What is this love thing?
Or at least where is it?
Is it in the heart fresh?
No, the heart is made of flesh.
Might be in hugs and cuddles,
Sex, words and turn ons...
Maybe in pills and portions,
Not in drugs but pure addictions...
Gifts, surprises and outings,
Satisfactions, moans and ratings!
Quality time and rouse,
Sacrifices, promises and vows?
Sweet names like darling?
Each other's pain bearing?
Care, share and attention,
A stupid mid-life session!
Oh where is my portion?
What is this thing?

What is this love thing?
Or at least how is it?
How does it come to be?
Where does it stay?
If it exists, why does it end?
And makes one outspend.
What is this thing?
Can someone please make me understand?
Before I conclude this that,
Love's just a fairy tale that was...
Introduced to reduce the wars.
And just another motion...
As an excuse to avoiding lotion.
What is this love thing?
What is this love thing.
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This is a beautiful writing..love itttt!!❤️
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