A false poet

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Fubbyy
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A false poet

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Cherry bombs, cherry bombs
Tight inside all the kids palms.
The wick grows short as time elongs
The sizzling sparks screams out in a song.
The future is ending, no more beaches or palms
And it's due to everything but bombs.
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Sklplanet3q
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Clever. I like it a lot.
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Post by Fubbyy »

Thank you very much. I wrote this about two years ago bored in a college class and have never let anyone read it.
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