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Jackielyn Del Mundo
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"Unique"

since when does loving a bad boy turns out to be fun?
are you ready to get your heart break as if there's a train on the run?
you put your heart in a railway
despite of the warnings they say

loving them is like making your graveyard
they gonna make you fall hard
but then they will left you onward
and blame you for not keeping on guard

that is the reality, that mostly of us foresee
but, it doesn't mean that all of us are gonna agree
they were some that is unique in the sea
that mostly of us wanted to see
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