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A Fight For Life

Posted: 13 Apr 2017, 13:34
by Amagine
A beautiful boy brought into the world.
A gift from the heavens, a gift from the Lord.
Skin as soft as a velvet rose.
Born with a big head but a cute baby nose.
Eyes roaming around examining the room,
thinking to himself, "I was born too soon."
He went into the emergency room in a rush.
He was breathing a little but not very much.
The doctors said he wouldn't live very long.
Two days at the most, then he'll be gone.
That beautiful boy didn't give up on life.
He knew in order to live, he'd have to fight.
For many days he fought until the battle was won.
The doctor said, "Congratulations. Welcome your son."
He escaped from death.
He escaped from being scorned.
On April 19th, a fighter was born.

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 15 Apr 2017, 15:45
by Books_are_Life
Amazing ⭐️

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 15 Apr 2017, 15:47
by rssllue
Wow! Super powerful! Well done!

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 15 Apr 2017, 15:50
by Amagine
Thank you so much you guys! :D

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 15 Apr 2017, 17:53
by rssllue
:tiphat:

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 15 Apr 2017, 23:56
by DATo
Beautiful and inspirational poem Amagine!

Thanks for sharing with us.

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 16 Apr 2017, 07:25
by Amagine
DATo wrote:Beautiful and inspirational poem Amagine!

Thanks for sharing with us.
Thank you so much for reading it, DATo! :D

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 18 Apr 2017, 17:42
by Jaime Lync
I love this poem. The rhyme scheme is simple and fits really well with how grave a topic but how light hearted it was written. Great share.

Re: A Fight For Life

Posted: 18 Apr 2017, 17:48
by Amagine
Jaime Lync wrote:I love this poem. The rhyme scheme is simple and fits really well with how grave a topic but how light hearted it was written. Great share.
Thank you so much! :D