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They don't cash cheques in heaven


they don't do two for one,


you can't join the queue for a bargain


that's not how things are done.


You might be rich in this here life


and have enough money for your trophy wife


drive a big car and have diamonds galore


but you'll be as poor as me,


at that final door.


There's no bargain basement in heaven


you'll get all you want on one floor


and there's no sneaking in through the back,


they've only got the one door.


You'll not get past this doorman


with bribery or deceit,


he's not interested in money


or any kind of receipt.


They don't cash cheques in heaven


they've got no dimes in their till


they don't do special offers,


just a straight forward decent deal.







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Absolutely beautiful!!!! ?
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Janien.

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and it's really good that you enjoyed it, your comment was/is lovely.

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Awesome poem -love the message! Thanks for sharing Snowghost.
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Jaime Lync.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it and your very kind comment is much appreciated


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