No cheques.
- snowghost
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No cheques.
they don't do two for one,
you can't join the queue for a bargain
that's not how things are done.
You might be rich in this here life
and have enough money for your trophy wife
drive a big car and have diamonds galore
but you'll be as poor as me,
at that final door.
There's no bargain basement in heaven
you'll get all you want on one floor
and there's no sneaking in through the back,
they've only got the one door.
You'll not get past this doorman
with bribery or deceit,
he's not interested in money
or any kind of receipt.
They don't cash cheques in heaven
they've got no dimes in their till
they don't do special offers,
just a straight forward decent deal.
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- Janien van Rooyen
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and it's really good that you enjoyed it, your comment was/is lovely.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it and your very kind comment is much appreciated
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