When We Praise

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Ayobami Kehinde
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When We Praise

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When we praise the Lord in His Majesty,
We are reminded of our lowly estate beside His exceeding awesomeness
When we worship Him in the beauty of His holiness,
Our unworthiness becomes glaring and we are awed by the grace that counts us worthy.

Written on 11-Oct-2013
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ANDREW MBAGO
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Post by ANDREW MBAGO »

This poem is beautifully crafted.Truly,when we praise the Sovereign Lord,his grace gives us abundant hope.We have to humble ourselves when we praise the Lord.This is a poem examining our faith and spirituality.I suggest you look at the structure to give it a beautiful image.Six lines would suffice.

Thank you so much.Keep on writing!
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Nina Rose
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Post by Nina Rose »

I love how this poetry gives glory to God through praise. I love the words used and the flow of it. I do not agree though about the last part of the poem.We should not have a glaring unworthiness.Because God made us i. His image and likeness.we are worthy and we are loved. We should be emoowered by God's creative powers.We are worthy beings.We are co-creators of the life we want and God has given us.
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