Loan Yourself to Me
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Loan Yourself to Me
Loan Yourself to Me
I don't need you
for me
to be happy
But I'm still asking
Loan yourself to me
In a deadly drought
I would dehydrate
And pass on
With my soul smiling
For I found the truer drink
In the eternal well of my infinite soul
And truly I need nothing
And yet these hands and mouth
Still write and speak
Begging in a way
Drown me in your love
Loan yourself to me
What do you think?
"Non ignara mali miseris succurrere disco." Virgil, The Aeneid
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beloved. The soul, as in my opinion, represents eternal existence. Compelling love and dedication well expressed in these lines.
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I truly need nothing
But sometimes I feel something
Harder and solid like soul
To make me show me all
I truly need nothing
But for me could you do
Something I wish from you
I need something.
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