I loved you

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I loved you

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Hello there!
We meet again oh
My so called soulmate
Under this obscure day.

A lonely sojourner
Thought it cool to live cool
Under the coldness of loneliness
yet i find myself
longing for your embrace.

Regardless of the heartache
The pain cannot overshadow the good times
I still find myself reminiscing over
Old memories with a seldom smile.


When you asked for a replay
The only thought that came to mind
'Can we really relive it all, change, do better?'

I thought you were the one
Still do, i am scared my love
Scared that you might not be at the end of my tunnel
I am rooting for you though
I think that is how deep my love is for you
Still rooting for A.R, for us.

Like two road diverge in the woods
So is our love
An unprecedented meeting
Yet we did dance to a melodious chord
A beautiful sad song
Played on the stings of our heart

I loved you
You where my Tent
And i was your sunshine
I loved you
As much as i hate to admit it
I still love you.
I just did not know how to show it
You became an illusion
An i a reflection of myself.

I am sorry
But i think i need to learn
To love me first.

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Post by Silvia Sianto »

This is solely a reminder to always love your self first
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Post by Elijah valentin »

I just went through a breakup yesterday. It was mutual. This piece really speaks to me. Thank you for sharing.
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Post by Sunny25 »

I am glad it help you out. I guess we all go through one lost or the other but I believe is for the greater good. To find the best soulmate.
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Post by Analis HG »

You can love someone truly and they still not be the "right person". Doesn't mean it isn't love :) Love comes in many forms
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Post by Suzelly Martinez »

The love you poem is really lovely. The words means so much as to tell you to love yourself first before you can love someone else. How cam you show you. Respect, Faithfulness or care to someone if dont have that for yourself. Love is something beautiful when you experience it. To florish you need to communicate when thing so wrong so it work.
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