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Take My Hand
Posted: 21 Jul 2017, 06:46
by Julez
At the deepest end of despair
At the darkest end of the tunnel
At the worst moment of depression
At the darkest hour of the night
At the deepest end of the river
At the bottom of the deep pit
Seems like there is no way out
Then a voice says to me
Take my hand
Grab hold don't let go
I'm here for you
Going nowhere
I won't leave you
Even if you want me to
I'm with you all the way
Just look up and grab hold
Take my hand
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 22 Jul 2017, 04:20
by Juliet Esther
Nice poem, I loved it. Kudos
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 24 Jul 2017, 08:41
by Julez
Thanks, Juliet
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 09 Sep 2017, 04:44
by ANDREW MBAGO
I really love the poem.It has deeply touched my heart such that I feel people should put their trusts in the Sovereign Lord.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 09 Sep 2017, 05:17
by KlareAllison
Encouraging piece! In a world of unending challenges and discouragements, this poem holds out a candle. Congrats, Julez, on your efforts on the poetic.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 10 Sep 2017, 19:56
by Julez
I do appreciate your comments. Thanks so much Andrew and KlareAllison.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 02 Nov 2017, 16:15
by Gabyap
This is a very inspiring and beautiful one, good work.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 03 Nov 2017, 04:57
by Julez
Awwww. Thank you Gabyap
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 03 Nov 2017, 07:05
by DATo
Very nice poem Julez. Thanks for sharing!
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 07 Nov 2017, 14:56
by Julez
Thank you DATo
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 07 Nov 2017, 17:11
by Thirielle
When I saw and read the title, it reminds me of the song 'I love you more than you'll ever know'. The song says, 'Take my hand, we'll walk awhile, we'll talk awhile. Feel my love always there beside you.' Simple words but there are so much meaning and emotions. Just like the poem you wrote.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 14 Nov 2017, 01:29
by johappy
I started tearing up! Very relatable, and I totally agree.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 21 Nov 2017, 07:43
by Julez
Thanks Thrielle. I wrote it at a time when I was quite low.
Thirielle wrote:When I saw and read the title, it reminds me of the song 'I love you more than you'll ever know'. The song says, 'Take my hand, we'll walk awhile, we'll talk awhile. Feel my love always there beside you.' Simple words but there are so much meaning and emotions. Just like the poem you wrote.
-- 21 Nov 2017, 07:45 --
Thank you, johappy?
johappy wrote:I started tearing up! Very relatable, and I totally agree.
Re: Take My Hand
Posted: 24 Nov 2017, 21:50
by Nash_Jay
Julez wrote:At the deepest end of despair
At the darkest end of the tunnel
At the worst moment of depression
At the darkest hour of the night
At the deepest end of the river
At the bottom of the deep pit
Seems like there is no way out
Then a voice says to me
Take my hand
Grab hold don't let go
I'm here for you
Going nowhere
I won't leave you
Even if you want me to
I'm with you all the way
Just look up and grab hold
Take my hand