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Nisha DSouza
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I think of you all the time
And miss your gentle smile
I turn around to see you
But you are gone.

I wish I could have said goodbye
I wish I could have loved you more
I wish my heart stopped crying
I wish God let you stay some more.

There are so many things I wish I had done
And so many things I wish I hadn't said
So much hurt that I wish to take back
But you are gone.

Even though you are not here
You will always be in me
Because you gave me life Mom
And made me ME!

I will wait for the day we meet again
Smile at each other with love again
Hug and laugh remembering the days gone by
When we will be together again.
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I think of you every minute of my time
But you're gone too soon
I love you mom
Watch over me .
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I can feel the depth in writer's emotions.Feelings expressed through beautiful poetry!!
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Sana Irfan Dar wrote: 07 Apr 2024, 23:54 I can feel the depth in writer's emotions.Feelings expressed through beautiful poetry!!
Thank you, Sana. This is my first serious and thoughtful poetry. 🙏
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