(This poem is actually untitled, but I shall call it 'Obscurity' for now)

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Olivia Lavric
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(This poem is actually untitled, but I shall call it 'Obscurity' for now)

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'The hopes might have fallen
Into the obscure depths;
The happiness, that stolen
Made room for the regrets;
A light upon the sky
Appears like a redemption,
Giving you wings to fly
To that other dimension,
Where neither tears, nor pain
Can reach your mind or soul,
But dissappear in vain
So that no one shall know.
Yet, that world seems so far
Despite it feels like home
The distance leaves a scar
That reaches to the bone.'

- Olivia Lavric
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