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I am

Posted: 15 Aug 2017, 20:58
by Trina Higgs
A life of hustle and bustle
A life like any others, full of sorrow
A life full of joy and happiness
A life of trials

A talent unseen by others
A song in my soul,
Ringing from the depths

Family
Friendship
All that matters in this world

A garden growing and dying
The spring of something new

The life of others
The ones closest to my heart
This is my life



I wrote this poem years ago. It reminded me of how time really does change things. What does it make you think of?

Re: I am

Posted: 18 Aug 2017, 13:45
by Kuznec
Time heals everything. At least bluns the pain of loss. The poem is sensual.

Re: I am

Posted: 30 Aug 2017, 17:13
by Trina Higgs
Kuznec wrote:Time heals everything. At least bluns the pain of loss. The poem is sensual.
Completely true. Thank you for letting me know what you think. I was surprised that you thought the poem is sensual; never had that thought about it before.

Re: I am

Posted: 01 Sep 2017, 18:29
by Angela Stripes
Kind of makes me think of what it means to be human. All the complexities of life, but at the end of it relationships matter. I think there's something deep inside all of us: the desire to be known and accepted.
This poem is a brief but deep outline of the nature of life... to me :) thanks for sharing it.