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Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 02 Nov 2017, 23:21
by Thirielle
September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.
Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!
I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.
I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??
Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.
Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.
I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 28 Nov 2017, 02:01
by laperr2922
Very interesting poem, I liked it. It has a lot of humor to it. Wow! Nicely done ?
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 29 Nov 2017, 11:26
by nochu_13
Wow. If i am to write a poem for my crush who's nearly getting married, it will probably sound stupid and bitter. Your work is perfectly nice. Good job.
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 30 Nov 2017, 17:09
by Dolor
Thirielle wrote: ↑02 Nov 2017, 23:21
September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.
Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!
I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.
I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??
Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.
Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.
I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.
If you did not paste a note, I would've thought it's fun.
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 30 Nov 2017, 17:45
by Thirielle
haha well. I'm glad I did post a note
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 30 Nov 2017, 17:47
by Thirielle
laperr2922 wrote: ↑28 Nov 2017, 02:01
Very interesting poem, I liked it. It has a lot of humor to it. Wow! Nicely done ?
Thank you!
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 30 Nov 2017, 17:48
by Thirielle
nochu_13 wrote: ↑29 Nov 2017, 11:26
Wow. If i am to write a poem for my crush who's nearly getting married, it will probably sound stupid and bitter. Your work is perfectly nice. Good job.
thank nochu! Haha. He's a funny guy and a close friend so I'm not really bitter whatsoever. I'm actually really happy for him.
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 17 Dec 2017, 03:32
by Frenjie
Wow, interesting! I like how creatively you've turned into a beautiful and humorous poem your (supposed to be sad) experience. Well done!
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 17 Dec 2017, 05:04
by Dolor
Thirielle wrote: ↑02 Nov 2017, 23:21
September is getting near,
You'll soon be married, oh dear.
I hope this poem made it clear,
That I don't really drink beer.
Let's throw a party, shall we?
Hey! Who's the flower girl? It's Me!
Wait. Do you really invite Summie?
Oh gosh! I should not expect Phoebee!
I remember I still don't have an invitation,
Guess you don't have any plan giving me attention.
But it's okay Sir Chief, I really don't mind,
And I know that love really makes you blind.
I just remembered you still awe me a coffee,
Wait what? Summie doesn't really want calorie.
I mean, okay fine I'll drink that bitter sweet honey,
Just be sure that it's 101% free, okidokie??
Cut all the crap, I'm talking about your wedding,
Soooo.. I really do hope you'll wear her that ring.
Take care of her, she's now one of my crushes,
Because if you don't , I'll burn you into ashes.
Should I really end this poem now?
Okay but I hope you liked it and say wow.
I'm wishing you all the best Spongebob,
All your happiness should be like a surprise mob.
I created this poem way back 3 years ago, when my crush (who is a close friend) is getting married. And yep, this poem is for him.
You made an eloquent poem. Congratulations! I noticed you wrote "awe" instead of owe and "surprise" should have been "surprised".
I hope you don't mind my corrections. ♡
Re: Wake Me Up When September Ends
Posted: 04 Jan 2018, 08:05
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
This is a humorous poem. And it has good rhyme. Great.