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The Way Back

Posted: 06 Apr 2018, 05:20
by thisgirl818
I wish you could find
Your way back into mine
Your lips pressed to mine
Your touch caressing my skin

I wish you could find
Your love back into mine
Or was it my love back to you?
Or was it my way back to you?

I wish I'd know what this is
This song i'm longing to sing
The sunset I desperately
Want to paint with my own hands

I wish I'd know what oblivion hid
If I loved you or just lived
If I was just trying to survive
As I walk through this Earth untamed

Re: The Way Back

Posted: 07 Apr 2018, 17:29
by sbcollins
I really like the idea of someone finding their way back into your way. It acknowledges that you both have your paths, but you wish they overlapped.

Re: The Way Back

Posted: 08 Apr 2018, 14:45
by qsusan
I like this poem. It's never easy to find your way back, to recapture what you lost, to restore the things and feelings that slipped through your fingers.