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Love

Posted: 06 Apr 2018, 18:39
by Lilly bn
it hurt when I'm with you fooling myself you won't be apart.
Is it love when my heart screams when he noticed you.
Is it hapinnes to be in your armes.
I heard then saying it was safety.
I owned you and you owned me but I guess that was only in my mind
You gaved me comfort
Heaven on ugly earth
And I still love u and I'll always do

Re: Love

Posted: 06 Apr 2018, 21:37
by Abbigailyankey48
This passage is vary relatable and well written. I found it to be a lovely and heartwarming story with all the components of the pain and love that comes from being in love

Re: Love

Posted: 06 Apr 2018, 21:43
by crediblereading2
I guess we all think this way when we really love someone and is afraid of losing that person.