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Love Fails

Posted: 21 Apr 2018, 03:49
by shortguytall
Hope, for its warmth,
Turns to a burning pyre,
When care is accursed;
Souls burn, and lovers
Sit and wallow in ashes,
When those loving gifts,
Which are most beautiful,
Are returned, rejected.

Re: Love Fails

Posted: 18 May 2018, 09:55
by Akosua +
The poet could have written more. I don't like how short it is. Though some short poetry are good, this isn't enough. For example, the poet could have elaborated more on the 'burning pyre', "when care is accursed" etc.