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Chaos

Posted: 06 May 2018, 03:29
by Keamberlite
I see you in my dreams where we dance under the light of the moon
Where we hold hands and tell tales of just me and you
I recite the captivating words to say to you
I practice the emotions to give away
I rehearse scenes of leaning in to plant that kiss on you
But just as I bump into you around the corner
And you flash that soul capturing smile
My thoughts jolts into commotion
My mind screams but my lips stutter inaudibly
My heart races and skids with exciting panic
The presence of You does something inexplicable to me
It's a kind of orderly excitement in a state of entropy
It is joyous senseless in spontaneous Chaos

Re: Chaos

Posted: 18 May 2018, 12:42
by Akosua +
A love poem

Re: Chaos

Posted: 22 May 2018, 15:01
by numbnotions
its actually a really nice poem about love. you really feel whats love and how you gotta go through it by reading it

Re: Chaos

Posted: 24 May 2018, 07:41
by biscuits
Keamberlite wrote: 06 May 2018, 03:29 I see you in my dreams where we dance under the light of the moon
Where we hold hands and tell tales of just me and you
I recite the captivating words to say to you
I practice the emotions to give away
I rehearse scenes of leaning in to plant that kiss on you
But just as I bump into you around the corner
And you flash that soul capturing smile
My thoughts jolts into commotion
My mind screams but my lips stutter inaudibly
My heart races and skids with exciting panic
The presence of You does something inexplicable to me
It's a kind of orderly excitement in a state of entropy
It is joyous senseless in spontaneous Chaos
Love causing chaos. This is really a captivating piece of poetry. You really captured my mind.

Re: Chaos

Posted: 25 May 2018, 21:25
by jgraney8
When plans and dreams meet reality, chaos ensues. I like the twist as the you disrupts the I so without trying.

Re: Chaos

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 04:46
by thaservices1
Keamberlite wrote: 06 May 2018, 03:29
The presence of You does something inexplicable to me
It's a kind of orderly excitement in a state of entropy
Great line!