Page 1 of 1

Who Is Eve?

Posted: 07 May 2018, 18:26
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
She is that girl you always meet,
As you walk down a busy street;

That officegirl across the hall,
Or someone's partner at a ball;

That dearest love now in your arms,
Or song diva with haughty charms,

Covered with beauty's coat-of-mail;
Or well exposed, in fashion's trail;

Are cavemen spared these glaring sights?
Just clubbing Eve on mating nights?

Of lore and myths sages employ,
Nefertiti, Helen of Troy,

How it escapes comprehension,
Eve's mysterious predilection;

What is she made of, cream and spice?
And liking men, but fearing mice?

Adam knows not how Eves are done,
He was asleep when God made one.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 18 May 2018, 12:30
by Akosua +
The ending is beautiful. I think the poet was differentiating between good women and bad women. That's what I felt.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 18 May 2018, 19:56
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Akosua + wrote: 18 May 2018, 12:30 The ending is beautiful. I think the poet was differentiating between good women and bad women. That's what I felt.
It's just that Eve is on all walks of life. Thanks for commenting.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 24 May 2018, 08:02
by biscuits
ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 07 May 2018, 18:26 She is that girl you always meet,
As you walk down a busy street;

That officegirl across the hall,
Or someone's partner at a ball;

That dearest love now in your arms,
Or song diva with haughty charms,

Covered with beauty's coat-of-mail;
Or well exposed, in fashion's trail;

Are cavemen spared these glaring sights?
Just clubbing Eve on mating nights?

Of lore and myths sages employ,
Nefertiti, Helen of Troy,

How it escapes comprehension,
Eve's mysterious predilection;

What is she made of, cream and spice?
And liking men, but fearing mice?

Adam knows not how Eves are done,
He was asleep when God made one.
Various type of women you meet in life. Nice poem. The rhymes in this art work just made the poem come alive.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 24 May 2018, 08:12
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Thank you @biscuits. I appreciate so much your comment.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 04:49
by thaservices1
Wow! That was excellent! Thank you for sharing. I agree with biscuits, a work of art.

Re: Who Is Eve?

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 07:57
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
thaservices1 wrote: 02 Jun 2018, 04:49 Wow! That was excellent! Thank you for sharing. I agree with biscuits, a work of art.
Thanks again.