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Sonnet 2000

Posted: 31 May 2018, 01:36
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
My wits beclouded, being spammed by grief,
With hopes deleted, I no longer dreamed,
As sorrow hacked my joys, then fled like thief,
And made me browse for smiles, that you once beamed:
As loneliness encrypts, my heart would hang,
Much malware now, my memory has stashed,
Farewell to files, to songs that I once sang,
For deep within, I felt my soul has crashed:
Might I reboot, to better times restore,
And once again, upload the life we shared,
When world freeze/frame, right after and before,
Thereby, between, our lasting love we bared:
.....Restart my life, reload the memories,
.....But edit out the cares, much bytes it frees.

Re: Sonnet 2000

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 03:48
by thaservices1
I like it!

Re: Sonnet 2000

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 07:55
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
thaservices1 wrote: 02 Jun 2018, 03:48 I like it!
Thanks. It means a lot to me.

Re: Sonnet 2000

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 08:02
by thaservices1
The Eve poem is my favorite of yours so far but this one is neat with computer parallels.
"Much malware now, my memory has stashed, "
Great line.

Re: Sonnet 2000

Posted: 02 Jun 2018, 08:09
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
thaservices1 wrote: 02 Jun 2018, 08:02 The Eve poem is my favorite of yours so far but this one is neat with computer parallels.
"Much malware now, my memory has stashed, "
Great line.
Just trying to bring Shakespeare up-to-date. lol.