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There is one more song
In the album of life
That we've got to sing together
Away from the suffering
The doubts
Its a song of victory
A song of joy
A melody of triumph

I can't sing it alone
You are part of the symphony
I need your high note
And rare voice
To top it up
We will sing to our audience
Who almost gave up
When we looked up

We will sing and dance
Without an ounce of shame
Because you and I touched
The healing at the hem
For He is still at the Helm.

Eddy Mkala, +254 720750983, Original Poem(12/10/2017)

Beautiful.

Think about using specifics and steering clear of cliche lines.
What makes his voice a rare voice?
Details ?
Specifics?
That would enhance the poem, creating more compelling and a connection.

Lovely. I like the 'there is one more song in the album of life' line. I could feel the longing there.