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I Have Something to Say

Posted: 01 Jun 2018, 10:58
by liftedbooks
I have something to say
It might not be relevant to you
Or to him
Or to her
But I have something to say
The words might not affect you
They might not touch you
Or change you
But I have something to say
These are my words
My thoughts
My ideas
I won’t keep quiet
What I have to say
Might not concern you
But that’s okay
Because it’s not about you
Now
Let me say what I want to

Re: I Have Something to Say

Posted: 14 Jun 2018, 07:27
by frank banks
Its good and creative because it has emotions attached to it.

Re: I Have Something to Say

Posted: 15 Jun 2018, 16:19
by palilogy
I wonder how the poem would sound if you got rid of the word you
Think about it - play around with the form and ideas =)
I think you have something there.

Re: I Have Something to Say

Posted: 17 Jun 2018, 04:12
by American-Alvin
First two lines of first stanza creates the reading atmosphre