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The Hideous Star

Posted: 18 Jul 2018, 03:59
by Hannahhhh
they see her as the girl on the streets
they see her as the failure
they see her as the public humiliation

what they don't see;
is how big her heart is
what they don't see;
is how open her mind is
what they don't see;
is how she cries her eyes out
knowing that no matter how much she tries
she'll never live to the people's expectations

Re: The Hideous Star

Posted: 18 Jul 2018, 16:51
by Stephanie Elizabeth
Never judge a book by its cover! Beautifully written.

Re: The Hideous Star

Posted: 20 Jul 2018, 09:56
by palilogy
I'm not sure anything new is being said in this poem that I haven't seen before.
Perhaps describe the people more or the girl.
Use specifics =)

Re: The Hideous Star

Posted: 28 Jul 2018, 13:36
by LASERRR__371
You should describe the accusations more.