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Tonight, our hands cling for romance
As our hearts beat to the sweet lyrics of pleasure
Let the night watch and dive us into trance
To find the deepest of all dazzling treasure

Like the moon stares into the silvery eyes of the sea
We watch as we feel the fire blazing in our souls
As the edgeless breeze sways the rooted body of the tree
We dance to the tune of our rhythmic desires

Let the bed accept us into its soft bossom
And our moans mate with the air
To dwell in the holiest place of our sanctum
As we cuddle, kiss and dwell in our bodies

On my chest you take the toll for the night
After the journey, you threw at me a lustful smile
It was our longing desire to melt in ourselves like a golden smile
As we set our ringed union on an infinite mile
- Raphael Adura

Wow fantastic.
Really Mr. Raphael adura is very charming poet.

thanks.
really appreciate

I think you have strong passion and emotions here - but you are not saying anything new - I have read this all before.
Use specifics and examples, make the poem more of you.