"Let's write a new story" game

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 28 Jan 2013, 13:21

Lol....... Good one! :p

Biguey, it's too funny, please continue. I can't handle this one. I am laughing too much! Hehehehehe......

-- 29 Jan 2013, 07:43 --

Hmm.....no response. Someone chickened out I see.

Ok.....here goes....

Three months later, reformed, retrained, and brainwashed, the pistol, now known as Harry papercut, was working in a printing press, finishing my case and allowing me to almost take off for my vacation when orders came to report to office - The Ink was on the lose; a new case had begun!

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 28 Jan 2013, 22:44

I just put down what comes into my head. Lot of nonsense.

But we had a problem with him breaking the chalk, so we got him a laptop and after he wrote I was a baaaad boy 100,000 times, he was cured and became rich and famous as the author of the best-seller, Lord of the Paper.

Oops, you beat me to the punch. Oh well, it can be one of those books with an alternate ending. How do you want to split the royalties from this epic?

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 28 Jan 2013, 22:53

I am going to compile it now, edit it, and post it on daTo s post write a story or two. Read it there. You can have the money, I will keep the name.

-- 29 Jan 2013, 07:56 --

Story number 2

The ink

The ink was rampaging around town; so much for my vacation.

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 28 Jan 2013, 23:11

I was all set to take my girl, Gladys Fleapouch to her favorite vacation spot, the Ti Juana red-light district for the annual retired hookers reunion, Gladys was class of 92, but The Boss (never did know his real name, just The Boss) called us in as we were the best qualified to deal with the dastardly criminal mastermind, The Ink.

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 28 Jan 2013, 23:19

Gladys was of course a secret agent, like me, working in the red-light district, but her years in the field had given her some good contacts,now badly needed to help discover what The Ink was up to.

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 28 Jan 2013, 23:29

After some investigating, we found out that The Ink was in Toontown blotting out all the cartoon characters,so we went to Roger Rabbit to get more information on him.

Got to go now, my dog just told me Daddy, I gotta go dump. Later.

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 29 Jan 2013, 03:10

You know how hard it it to get information out of Roger Rabbit, with him obseessing about his wife cheating on him all the time, so we got him drunk on milk to unveil The Inks hideaway.

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 29 Jan 2013, 10:54

His favorite was fermented horse's milk, and after a few drinks the rabbit was ready to spill the beans.

Its early, the old grey matter isnt quite in focus yet. Need more coffee.

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 29 Jan 2013, 11:31

Hey Bighuey, check out the post by DATo called Write a true story, or two in writing discussion forum and check my entry. Made a story from our nonsense and posted it there. Read it. You are In it as thanks for helping me with this post.

-- 30 Jan 2013, 01:06 --

" I tell you," the rabbit hiccuped. "it was just frightful! Frightful I tell you. My Jess dancing, him drooling over her...boooohoooo..."

The rabbit broke down. I ordered more milk for him.

Please try to write more dialogues now. It's more fun. follow my lead.

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 29 Jan 2013, 22:13

Sorry Im slow. I was on chat with a friend, she joined the forum and I told her about this story thing and she wants to join in. She goes by Bookbunny if you want to tell her more about it.

I felt sorry for the poor sap, I told him, "Bear up. Theres other rabbits in the fields."

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 31 Jan 2013, 03:48

Everyone is welcome to join in. Jump right in.

the more the merrier. tell her to just start posting. It's cool.

"My Jess is the bomb," he sobbed. I could see the conversation going no where. The problem with Roger is you can't distract him from his wife.

(B, I think it's hard to go a one liner in a conversation. Let's be flexible. One to two lines now as long as the story makes sense.)

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 31 Jan 2013, 11:49

True. Two lines are better.

We knew we couldnt get anything from Rog, so we went to the scene of the Ink's last escapade to find more clues. It was a disaster, Superman was blotted out except his head, all that was left of Spiderman was his left arm and an ear, and to Gladys' horror, the Hulk was completely gone.

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 04 Feb 2013, 06:01

"Oh man! Not the Hulk!" I knew how the narrator loved the Hulk and she always made me work with him! We took Superman's head and after finding the headless horseman from sleepy hollow we stuck his head on it, now left with a superhero with lazer vision and a killer aim with an axe!

Bighuey · Post by **Bighuey** » 04 Feb 2013, 10:53

We tracked The Ink to an abandoned warehouse after a delay in a pumpkin patch, where Superman-Headless Horseman stopped to chop up pumpkins. But after we got to the warehouse, we found The Ink with his partner in crime, Professor Moriarty, mixing up a batch of non-eraseable ink.

asmaahsan · Post by **asmaahsan** » 04 Feb 2013, 12:09

I love Sherlock Holmes too, especially the new one with Robert Downey jr! That guy is the real thing!

I was that mad professor moriarty's biggest fan, but as a law enforcing agent, I had to control myself. After offering some neatly chopped up boxed pumpkin salad to my favourite villain of all times,with extra napkins to clean up later, getting his autograph on my bullet proof jacket, we arrested him, sadly, and headed over to toon-yard, the scotland yard of toon land.