Fewer commas,
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Re: Fewer commas,
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You are right in saying that commas are used for clarity.
One reviewer uses this signature: "Let's eat, kids!" Commas save lives. (Sorry I can't remember his/her name.)
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Americans use commas with "but" when it's connecting two independent clauses. If it's connecting a dependent clause with an independent clause, then a comma is not used. Same rule for "and."jenjayfromSA wrote: ↑22 Oct 2018, 09:24 Commas are a thorny issue, especially with "and". I grew up with British punctuation which does not use a comma with "and". I see Americans do, but then they don't use a comma with "but". I've been browsing sites, but I still get confused. I see one rule is to use the comma with "and" when the second thought is a full sentence. On the whole I go by gut feel and what helps the reader's understanding. Am I right? Who knows.
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As here works much like because which is a subordinating conjunction. All the examples on the Merriam-Webster site https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/as use as without a comma.Eva Darrington wrote: ↑22 Oct 2018, 10:42 I use FANBOYS as a tool as well. I am thinking the same rule applies when "as" serves as a conjunction (with two independent clauses): "Marge decided to wear her gloves to the game, as she knew it would be cold once the sun went down."
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