Conflicting feedback on comma’s
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- Wriley
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Re: Conflicting feedback on comma’s
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- Wriley
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I tend to agree with you on this. I feel the comma deductions are really an unnecessary overkill. Especially considering the total score for grammar, as you say. It would be reasonable, in my humble opinion, to deduct 10 points if there is an overall misuse of commas. But to deduct 20 points for two commas too many or too few in an entire review is just unreasonable.lucia_kizas wrote: ↑19 May 2019, 11:09Glad to know I am not the only oneunamilagra wrote: ↑19 May 2019, 10:40This is me too. If I don’t know for sure about a comma, I will reword the sentence.Brendan Donaghy wrote: ↑19 May 2019, 08:06
That sounds as good a solution as any! I've completed six reviews so far, and I'm finding that my sentences get shorter and less complex with each review I write. As you say, every comma error costs 10 points, so why risk it? If in doubt, rewrite!that being said, I wish those commas did not cost the while 10 points as we only get 40 in total
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There is more to commas than that... and often people don't recognize the needed pause of a comma if they don't read it aloud.
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