Two sentences. Which one would you choose?
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Two sentences. Which one would you choose?
For a while, she is the only one he can trust and rely on.
What do you think?
Grammarly accepts both.
Personally, I think 'For a while she was the only one he could trust and rely on.' (could sounds better than can here)
Online Book Club says one of the above is incorrect. Which one? I still disagree.
10 points down for that even though it wasn't incorrect! Shocking.
is or was? I believe 'is' is better.
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I actually made a mistake in the question and the alternative did have a 'could' in it. However, my contention is that even if both are correct, it is still a personal preference issue. Not an inaccurate grammar issue on my part.
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but the use of 'could' instead of 'can' is better.
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