The "Oxford comma" explained
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Re: The "Oxford comma" explained
The serial comma is used before the "and" in an list of equal items:
He bought red, blue, and green paint.
But the Oxford guide SPECIFICALLY omits that comma, with:
He bought red, blue and green paint.
The Oxford comma is NOT a comma that's omitted nor is it the "serial" comma. It's used before the "and" in an "uneven" list that contains groupings -- here is the exact quote from their own guide:
I ate fish and chips, bread and jam, and ice cream.
In this example, actually taken from the Oxford College guide, the "Oxford comma" is the comma after "jam" and before the final "and". So the two types of commas are different, even though the difference is subtle. Oxford College guide essentially puts a deleted comma back into the sentence if the meaning is unclear with the comma missing, per the food example above.
As I said, I really don't care, just so long as the guide I'm following is consistent. I myself prefer the serial comma because it's more logical (and taking from my tech background, more "scientific") but common usage is now on the trend to not use the serial comma. I'm okay with either, just so long as I know the rules.
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-- Mon Aug 17, 2015 3:07 pm --
Oxford comma is sometimes referred to as the serial comma or Harvard comma. They are the same it just matters what style guide and what region you are writing for.
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I went to the movies with the kids, John, and James.
vs.
I went to the movies with the kids, John and James.
Without the Oxford comma, the meaning is changed and it sounds like John and James are the kids' names. The actual meaning of the sentence is that John, James, and the kids went to the movies with you.
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If Oxford College creates what IT CALLS THE OXFORD COMMA, then that's their comma and their rules. Someone else can't say "no, the Oxford comma is not this way, it's this way, Oxford is wrong about their own definition of the comma rules."
Now someone else can create other rules for commas and say "this is the serial comma rule" or "this is the Chicago Style Guide" rule, but they can't re-define the Oxford comma rules and call them the "Oxford comma" rules if the rules are different from what Oxford first defined. If a new set of rules is created, then those are named "Ed's Rules" or "Karen's Rules" and that's fine.
The purpose of the Oxford comma is as bookowlie describes -- it's used if a deleted comma messes with the meaning of the phrase.
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Again these are style guides. GUIDES. Use your judgement. Afterall that is what a guide is... just a recommendation. So be aware that it exists, but do what you feel most comfortable with on this site. We do not have a style guide.
modertimes you have a specific set of rules you must follow because of your publisher. If you are bringing this to our attention because you do not want us to look at books that use the UK form of English grammar negatively due to ignorance then you have a vaild point. Otherwise this is not relevant to how we write our reviews.
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I totally agree. By the way, I used my example as a way to explain how not using the comma can make the meaning of the sentence confusing. I, for one, always use the comma. I use it for sentences such as "I like to eat fried chicken, lobster, and shrimp." Splitting hairs regarding whether the comma is called the Oxford comma, Harvard comma or serial comma doesn't change the meaning.bluemel4 wrote:Dude... this is getting silly. Do yourself a favor and google Oxford comma vs serial comma and see what happens. It will be an eye opening experience I am sure.
Again these are style guides. GUIDES. Use your judgement. Afterall that is what a guide is... just a recommendation. So be aware that it exists, but do what you feel most confortable with on this site. We do not have a style guide.
modertimes you have a specific set of rules you must follow because of your publisher. If you are bringing this to our attention because you do not want us to look at books that use the UK form of English grammar negatively due to ignorance then you have a vaild point. Otherwise this is not relevant to how we write our reviews.
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It's all a "guide" but you're missing the point, blue: IF a book is put out by Oxford College and they themselves formulate a rule that they call the "Oxford comma" then insofar as that guide is constituted, the definition that they provide is theirs to say what it is. And others may misinterpret that rule but it's pretty clear to me that the Oxford comma is different from the serial comma, per the examples I listed.
Now if someone else thinks that the definition of the Oxford vs serial commas is the same, then that other person needs to show how they are the same, via the same examples I set. If the other rulebook defines it differently, they are very welcome to create a "Jim's comma rule" or whatever, but they cannot redefine the Oxford comma rule to suit their own interpretation. A meter is 100 cm long because the SI people define it as such. Someone else can't come along and say "no, a meter is 45 cm".
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I did laugh at your political take on the subject. I can imagine the next Republican debates, asking them "Do you use the serial comma or not? Which should Americans use?" and watching them stumble around.
Reminds me of the Monty Python sketch where they have Fidel Castro, Karl Marx, and I think Mao Tsetung on a panel, and ask them questions about British rugby.
Or in the Democrat debate, asking Hillary whether she uses the Oxford comma, and she'll reply "What difference does it make?"