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Normally, I use semicolons to separate two independent clauses that I want in the same sentence. In the following sentences, I think it would need only a comma because, to me, having the word "If" at the beginning makes the first part into a clause, not a separate sentence. I've been caught on this by the OBC editor before though, and they said it should be a semicolon, not a comma. How am I looking at this incorrectly? The whole problem seems to hinge on whether or not the word "If" make the first part an incomplete sentence. Grammarly seems to think either is correct, so that's no help. So, commas or semicolons in the following sentences? Why?

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I'd use commas as well so I'm curious about the use of semicolons.

Your example is written correctly.

I agree with the others. Your sentences are fine. There are writers who use semicolons somewhat loosely and might put one after "shadows" instead of a comma (because that's a long sentence). And some editors would allow it. But it's NOT required, not at all.

Thank you for responding and for the support. I appreciate it!

I’m late to this question to respond as I am catching up reading in this forum, but your sentences in question are perfect. I see the semicolon used so many times incorrectly. To throw those into the places you put commas would not be right. What you have written are “if” “then” sentences without the “then”. Those always seem to have a comma. Hope it all has gone in your favor.

I would also have used commas in this context. It would be really helpful if someone could explain why semi-colons are more appropriate here.

I always use semicolons when there are two complete sentences with the same subject. Otherwise, I’ll use a comma, when the sentence is combined with a conjunction.

This is also a struggle for me. I would use a comma too

I would use a comma in this instance.