Comma or not?

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The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that rumors.

In this sentence, should there be a comma or maybe even a colon before "rumors"? None of the grammar checkers are picking it up and I use 5 different ones. It just doesn't look or sound right to me without anything, though. Does anyone know a rule for this?
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Kelyn wrote: 04 Feb 2020, 22:01 The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that rumors.

In this sentence, should there be a comma or maybe even a colon before "rumors"? None of the grammar checkers are picking it up and I use 5 different ones. It just doesn't look or sound right to me without anything, though. Does anyone know a rule for this?
I agree that there should be something there. I would use a dash, but either a colon or a comma seems fine as well. I wouldn't know any rule to cover this example, though. You can also replace "that" with "rumors" to be on the safe side, but the sentence wouldn't be the same, I know.
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Post by inaramid »

I agree with Miriam.

I'd go with a colon or a dash. The guideline below might help:
The colon can be used to emphasize a phrase or single word at the end of a sentence. An em dash can be used for the same purpose.

EXAMPLE: After three weeks of deliberation, the jury finally reached a verdict: guilty.

From https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/colon.html
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I'd write your sentence as:

1) The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that: rumors.
2) The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that — rumors.
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Post by Manang Muyang »

inaramid wrote: 05 Feb 2020, 06:36 I agree with Miriam.

I'd go with a colon or a dash. The guideline below might help:
The colon can be used to emphasize a phrase or single word at the end of a sentence. An em dash can be used for the same purpose.

EXAMPLE: After three weeks of deliberation, the jury finally reached a verdict: guilty.

From https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/colon.html
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I'd write your sentence as:

1) The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that: rumors.
2) The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that — rumors.
Thanks, kabayan. I'll take note of that site.
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Post by Lisa A Rayburn »

Thank you both, I think I'll go with the colon. Inaramid, thanks for the site. I've bookmarked it.
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I think there was a need to include a comma before rumors or just put the word in quotation marks.
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Post by Melexa »

Miriam Molina wrote: 05 Feb 2020, 01:05
Kelyn wrote: 04 Feb 2020, 22:01 The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that rumors.

In this sentence, should there be a comma or maybe even a colon before "rumors"? None of the grammar checkers are picking it up and I use 5 different ones. It just doesn't look or sound right to me without anything, though. Does anyone know a rule for this?
I agree that there should be something there. I would use a dash, but either a colon or a comma seems fine as well. I wouldn't know any rule to cover this example, though. You can also replace "that" with "rumors" to be on the safe side, but the sentence wouldn't be the same, I know.
I agree with you. I'd use a dash.
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Post by Rabiul_tanmoy250 »

I think this sentence will be correct :

" The ugly rumors of new civil unrest had started up again, but they were just that: rumors. "
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Post by Claire Vaal »

I would say something needs to go there. I agree with the people saying a colon or a dash.
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