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Use of comma after the title/position of a certain individual

Posted: 14 Oct 2020, 07:48
by Nimwel Fae
Hi! Good morning! I hope all is well on your side. I have a few questions regarding the scorecard of my book review. :D
I have a question to the Editor Number 2 who edited my book review. Why did he/she put a comma after the words Chief Inspector? The words Chief Inspector there refers to the position of Jim Sheehan in the police.

This is the editor's comment: 1. Chief Inspector(,) Jim Sheehan(,) and his team are confronted with a series of.
I was referring to the leader and his team. Just wondering about this one. I hope you can enlighten me on this.

Re: Use of comma after the title/position of a certain individual

Posted: 14 Oct 2020, 13:34
by MrsCatInTheHat
You need to request a recheck. That is where the editor would answer your question, not here. Give them the information you shared here. They probably thought the Chief Inspector and Jim Sheehan were two different people.

Re: Use of comma after the title/position of a certain individual

Posted: 14 Oct 2020, 18:51
by Nimwel Fae
Yes. Thought so, too. Thank you!