What is wrong with this sentence?
Posted: 22 Jan 2021, 11:09
I imagine that this sentence could be improved, but I am looking for actual grammar errors.
The sentence includes a quote from Wikipedia - He describes The Shaman Cycle as fictional urban shamanism: "a Western adaptation that draws on contemporary and modern roots." Wikipedia.
( Grammarly tells me the sentence is "Terrific work?" but maybe Grammarly is not 100% reliable?)
The sentence includes a quote from Wikipedia - He describes The Shaman Cycle as fictional urban shamanism: "a Western adaptation that draws on contemporary and modern roots." Wikipedia.
( Grammarly tells me the sentence is "Terrific work?" but maybe Grammarly is not 100% reliable?)
The "a" should be capitalized unless it was a continuation of a broken off sentence, in which case it should have been punctuated to indicate that.