Comma Around Parenthetical
Posted: 01 May 2021, 15:23
Hi,
I recently wrote this line: "Even now, my little Bean is lying by my laptop screen, making sure I’m near, because she just wants some love and attention today."
I meant "making sure I'm near" parenthetically, adding unnecessary information to "lying by my laptop screen," and thus put a comma both before and after the phrase. I did not include either comma due to the "because" because "because" does not require a comma before it. Was I wrong to include the commas?
I recently wrote this line: "Even now, my little Bean is lying by my laptop screen, making sure I’m near, because she just wants some love and attention today."
I meant "making sure I'm near" parenthetically, adding unnecessary information to "lying by my laptop screen," and thus put a comma both before and after the phrase. I did not include either comma due to the "because" because "because" does not require a comma before it. Was I wrong to include the commas?