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Is there an error here?
There were six competitors per each side; that is, six from North Korea and six from South Korea. (Per each)
'Le Cordon Bleu' had branches all over the world including in Seoul, Korea. (Including in)
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Second one: I think it's right. Not sure though.
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I agree with you. The second one seems correct to meVishnu Priya B wrote: ↑24 Jun 2021, 04:49 It's either per or each. Not both.
Second one: I think it's right. Not sure though.
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Second sentence -- you don't really need the "in" after "including," but it doesn't actually violate any grammatical rules.
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