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Spelling/Grammar Errors?

Posted: 05 Aug 2021, 17:39
by asteel18
Can someone help me with the errors in these sentences? Too many commas? Not enough? Maybe I'm missing a word? Thanks for any insight.

“A lot can happen in the absence of light,” states Judi Miller in her book Perfect.

In her book Perfect, Judi Miller openly shares her fears and desire for answers on her path to enlightenment.

Through her journey, Judi lets us know that just because something is scary, doesn’t always mean it’s something to fear.