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Please, can someone help me to clarify if any of the punctuations in the grammar below is incorrect;

If you are looking for a fiction book with a touch of mystery and suspense, then this book might just be what you are looking for—that is, if you can actually endure the author's untidy writing style.


Someone should help me out with this please.

Hi,

It might be too late, but I do not see any issues with the punctuation.

It is correct. I do not see any punctuation error.

Hi
I might be wrong and if so I apologize. I don't see any errors, however maybe where you put the - you might rather put brackets at the beginning and end?
For example:
(that is, if you can actually endure the author's untidy writing style).

Thank you all for squeezing out the time to help me out with the Grammar. Leonie, I'm not offended by your contribution, I am actually grateful.